Final draft & Analysis

By showing this draft to a niche group of our target audience, we were able to receive some positive comments, as well as criticisms for our draft video. Some of the criticisms were that at the beginning, the font made the overall video look unprofessional. When Ethan was talking before the flash back of his nightmare, the audience were not able to hear his dialogue as it was too quite. In addition, during the over the shoulder view of Ethan, his face was supposed to be blurry at the start and then focus when he starts saying his dialogue; however the process of being blurry and focus happened twice.

By getting these feedbacks, we are able to improve our final video. In the final video, we will be using font that looks more professional. Moreover, we will have to make the audio louder, which will enable the audience to understand what is happening. In the over the shoulder scene, we will have to make sure to cut out one of the blurry and focus part because if we do not take out one of this then it will very sloppy. Furthermore, we will be adding some scenes to make sure that the audience will be able to understand what is going on. Also, we will be changing some editing to make it less confusing for our audience to understand what is going on in the scene.

However, near the end of the video we decided to keep some of the editing the same. The editing we decided to keep the same is when the colour changes, during a black and white (memory) scene. This is because the change of the colour empathise Eva’s split personality. This clearly shows how Eva’s split personality; Evie is trying to overtake Eva’s life.